Senior Brother, Stop It, You Are A Villain! Chapter 137 Discussion

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The story starts like a good junk food, something you can read without no expectations and have some fun on the way. But, the tale, unfortunatly, got a little boring along the journey.

Characters: 0/5

No one is memorable. The protagonist is a boring person who the writter try to retreat him as a saint. Sometimes, that backfire because he act as a hypocritical. He is really dumb in some situations, more s*upid than the villains. And the villains are too fool. Futhermore, they are almost the same individual, and because of that, the things get uninteresting really fast after the first 50 chapters. The heroine is dull as well, you can’t care less about her. Tedious and unintelligent side characters are the most part of people here.

Character development: 0/5

There are no development, so...

World building: 0/5

No good world building here, even after 100 chapters.

Fighters: 0/5

I just skip all them, is just the same bullsh*t of change of energies blast and sword techniques you don’t give a f*ck about them.

Story:1/5

The only positive point is how the writer uses the wuxias cliches to build good scenes where we can see the villains to lose their disputes, but nothing else. It’s a little funny how the author, sometimes, find faults with these ordinary techniques, but later, he build a MC who act like theses protagonists...
 
  • #2
I love this book. This love story is very different but a magical one as compared to the previous ones.
 
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I just want to thank everyone that has been supportive in reading my stories. Constructive criticisms are appreciated. Have a great day!
 
  • #8
What is going on with this book....PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS BOOK SOON
 
  • #11
OMG I love live this book. Alejandro and Kiara are wonderful. It had me cry, laugh, smile, and even got me angry at times. Love your books Muse.
 
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