ZeroHour

After reading through this story I am happy to say it has been a pleasure of mine; the way the author writes makes it easy to understand the pace is just perfect; I don't feel like im rushing through a story and I don't feel like nothing is happening. It's a perfect middle ground that keeps you having a good time. Keep it up author

I want to at some point remove the AI image of the book with an actual cover, and change it with each new volume, but I want to be the one to draw the cover, which will probably take time, and might take more than one volume before I can change the novel cover.which by them, it'll be too late or maybe it will be a few more volumes before I get the opportunity to change the novel cover, however I am fine as I am not contracted to anyone as of yet, meaning I can change it anytime. I hope you look forward to it.

not bad, though I can't say for sure if it's really reached the end or not at chapter 8.the story feels more like an overview of what happens, though in a few points, it gives a lot more detail. if each 'scene' was a chapter themselves, this story would easily get up to 98 chapters, at least. though I can't really say if the author would choose to do that.though there are also a few points where it was difficult to really understand what was going on, as the overview aspect kind of hindered that, plus sometimes the backstory of the situation is explained after. yet, overall, I think it went pretty well.

I'm falling in love with the Davin and Bella character already, I must say the story is amazing Even though I don't know where it headed to. Keep up the work going

"Remember leave and dont come back."

Kelompok itu memandang Iris yang menunjukkan hal yang sudah jelas untuk sesaat.

" We  should turned him into the office.."Said the female.

"If you can't do this your better off just dying." She said, "Look at this." She pointed to her back at something I couldn't see.