Xiu Xian: Please ask the ancestor to die

From my perspective, your story has a strong foundation with its classic hero’s journey setup. Kevin’s role as the chosen Four Swords Master gives the story a sense of destiny and responsibility, which can be compelling if developed well.  However, the novel could benefit from more polished writing and deeper world-building. The pacing should allow readers to connect with Kevin’s struggles and victories rather than rushing through key moments. Additionally, expanding on the lore behind the Four Swords Master could add more depth to the story.  Overall, it’s a promising concept, but its impact depends on execution. Don't worry author, don't be pressure on what I said, cause I also need to improve with mine, just want to point out and help someone I know who also need to stand out through his/her work. You deserve such, as you also work hard in your passions and creation. Keep up, your wonderful work, author!

Author hereI'll just break it down for you guys.I'm not a fan of overly described physical aspects, I prefer describing emotions and small actions that speak more than words.I like action scenes, with powers, and explosions. There's a lot of magic stuff but also physics and real world basis for everything in the story.This is not the traditional type of God plot. They don't have subjects, they don't get worshiped -at least not all the time. This is abt normal people that became Gods, they are not evil nor saints.I'm opened for discussions. I'm obsessed with using AI to create portraits of the Four Gods.

Not bad at all.                           

The story is fine, but I would like you to put some film that will not succeed for x reasons and that you help it succeed in that world. It would also be nice if you took an anime to the big screen.

the idea is good but the novel became unbearable as I read deeper. I mean, he's the master of Fate, yet all he ever did was focus on martial arts. I literally skipped the entire Martial Arts Exams Whatever. If he wanted to be a martial artkist, he could've chosen a better roleplay not Master of Fate

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