Wait For Me After School

An average novel, with some mistakes, such as the hero being smarter than all the characters, at least make another character confront him, the positive things are that there is no plot, I hope you develop it

The novel is pretty good so far, amazing! It has a lot of action and suspense that makes the readers feel excited and nervous, even me. You describe the scenes vividly and creates a lot of tension and drama. The fights are well-written and show the different abilities and strategies of the characters.However:The novel has some grammatical and spelling errors that can distract the readers and affect the flow of the story. You should proofread and edit the chapters before publishing them or use a tool like Grammarly to check for mistakes if you want to...The novel has some inconsistencies and plot holes that can confuse the readers and create logical errors. For example, in chapter 2, Kage says he doesn’t know what level three is, but in chapter 3, he says he knows it’s a rumor. In chapter 4, Kage says he doesn’t know how to use his OGI, but in chapter 5, he uses it without any explanation. In chapter 6, Kage says he doesn’t know who Unknown is, but in chapter 7, he calls him his best friend. You should keep track of the details and events of the story and make sure they are consistent and coherent. (I'm not a pro or anything, just some advice.)But Overall, still good! The novel is an enjoyable and entertaining read that has a lot of strengths and possibilities. You have a creative imagination and a good sense of humor. The novel can appeal to fans of sci-fi and fantasy genres who like action-packed.

All that glitters is gold

Pool Manage: Good morning John, you ready to save some lives today?

"No, but I don't want to know." He goes to the bath.

Endurance: Tired from Farting! lol

Originally, Jiang Liushi had felt that he could never associate with them, but now there was no need to worry about it. Jiang Liushi called Ma Hao and waited a bit before he answered, and got straight to the point.

ok I replied ...i write my name and i go inside the entrance gate and i was surprised that there's to many students who will enroll in this school