Vow to Heaven: A Villain’s Rise

Very impressive start for a story. Good and interesting narrative and a very original work overall . Just a few chapters have come out and I already feel invested. I hope you continue to write the story!

Your writing style is deep and captivating, crafting a mysterious and dark world with precision. The dialogue feels natural, and the suspense builds up brilliantly, especially with the "Shadow Traps," keeping the reader eager for more. A powerful and remarkable story!

Really strong vibes dark, brutal, and with characters that stick Had me hooked instantly nice one ngl 🔥

Love the way you wrote. The beginning of the story wasn't rushed nor was it slow. This story is should become popular. Also, I would suggest you to add some more tags to your novel such as mystery.

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Welcome to this book, it's my fifth book and i hope you enjoy read it. You can check on my profile to read another books i made. I enter this book to a contest so i hope you can support me for it. Thank you!

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show, on get paid

Let's try to meditate and concentrate. Let's sit and relax, my PE teacher told me breathing is the secret for proper relaxation. Okay breath in breath out, I remember that fruit has the same look with Ito Ito No Me when I played Roblox. So I stop my nonsense meditation and just point my finger on the ceiling and try to imagine a string and now I can see a fascinating thing. A very thin thread connected to me that I can control easily. Imagine my surprise when a 10 strings/thread shows up connected to each of my fingers and then connected to the ceiling. Then an amazing idea comes to my mind. I jump then tried to swing like Wrecking Ball while singing the same song all over the room which was a bad idea since I am in a small room and did not notice the door that was opened by my aunt a while ago almost wreck my balls literally. Good thing I have this spidey sense bullsh*t and reflex. Hey don't judge for doing that swinging and singing that song, I am just doing sane man do. I am just trying to gain some semblance in a world full of infinity cr*p, excuse my language. I really admire those people who got Gamers Mind when they were ROBbed from the earth and was transferred somewhere in the Multiverse.