Villainess Changes Her Destiny

Potential! I must say, it is exciting diving into the world. While it's not without flaws, the potential of the plot and promise on display are certainly good.Writing - Needs improvement. A lot. But it's readable, understable and sufficient. Still, if the author can improve the writing by a level or two, it will be amazing. Tip- Focus on some realistic reactions from characters, situations and such. Plot- Since there isn't much of plot given till now, I have considered it's potential. If The author plays it right, the plot can become a great piece among 'system' contents.Character - Dialogues! they make or break the characters and it is good to see, character have plenty interaction. Well done there. Just needs some refinement.World Building- Although not unique in its genre with systems, ranks, monsters, etc. I could understand the world quite a lot from the first 15 chapters. So, I would say it was done great. Well, there is more to explore in future, so I belive again in it's potential.Overall, it is a good story. Needs editing and refinements, but still enjoyable.

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This is the first new novel that got my attention and has been a great read every chapter. Please update more.🫶

So…I’m on the 17th chapter and while the story’s been great so far, it hasn’t warranted the 5* review I’m currently giving. What warrants this 5* review is my pity towards the author for having to deal with so many readers that don’t pay attention. As I said, I am on chapter 17 and I’ve lost count how many times people have attempted to fix the author’s “errors” for things they didn’t pay attention to. There have been explanations to all stat changes, or lack there of yet these readers constantly believe they know what they are talking about which then leads to further confusion as other readers begin to believe what they say.Sorry author, story’s great and I have plans on catching up, hope you the best.

He watched patiently as Nathan cupped his hands and summoned his water to feed the potted plants upon the lower shelf in their perfect alignment.  However he frowned, he could not summon the water, his body was telling him to stop.  This instinctual side to his nature was a good thing, in Ren Zexian's point of view as too often he had seen men and women push themselves beyond their boundaries causing troubles in their future cultivation, even deviation of it in some cases.  

The three spirit ancestor were blown away but the duke took the full blast head-on.

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They really were just black clothes. A black shirt, black pants, black underwear, a black overcoat and black boots, a completely black outfit. It felt weird, but it was still plenty better than his current clothing, so he quickly changed and threw the beginner clothes into his Inventory for now.