Titan - Whispers in the Snow

The beginning of the novel is good. Your approach of making the introduction(chapter 0) philosophical is intriguing.As I read further, I found the build up to be good too, even though I thought some things were odd, but that didn't affect the quality and flow. The scenes are interesting and that seems to be your strongest point so far, like, you are very good at writing moments. The problem I had in the middle is how much of it was "filler". A decent bit of it was character information and skill information (system time) that didn't really move things ahead but rather slowed them down and broke my immersion.I can't say much about the character design since there's not much to go off of. Most of the beginning was action and it's in the most recent chapters that you started  showing his initial disposition. I guess we'll see...

i like the villain MC novel very much and this novel is became one of my favourite novel

i love it so far. But sometimes when im reading it feels so distant. But thats complain on high levels. Its written Great.

I want to make a live action transformers TV series,mobile suit gundam, Ghost in the shell and other anime/unseen comics book characters on the big/small screen project from different comic books companies. I want to make a primus and unicron live action tv series,G.I joe tv series and M.A.S.K. (Mobile Armored Strike Kommand). I want cw and DC to make a blue beetle TV series so that I can play the character blue beetle. For my mobile suit gundam TV series I will use the classic song and I will make the gundam series romantic, action and comedy like the anime.

...….3 days later.

"I look like Ryu Hayabusa with these bracers, first a murderer and now a ninja ... what a volatile imagination I have" - ​​thought Takashi recalling one of his first console games.

After cleaning herself she gathered all of her courage to face her maniac boss. She didn't know how to face him after yesterday's episode of make out. And it wasn't her fault at all.

Then I activated my EMS to send us to the space. After all [Gate of Babylon] skill only spit out or throwing treasure out, not become an actual "Gate" despite the skill name.