The World of Eclipsed

This story is amazing I love first person story’s keep up the good work just maybe all the I’s you can fix and use other words because it’s a bit repetitive but it’s really good

At least MC has some brain cell. And plot has progressed.

I gotta say I never thought someone would put this much work into a book, thanks, this is awesome. Please don't drop this book, especially the world setting, it's awesome.

"I shouldn't have barged in on you like that" I apologized as he stood next to me. "You are a much better sport than I am" I added "I'm not sure how I would have reacted if I saw you standing next to me while I was waking up"

"Yeah, Sasuke. It is morning, so we have to hurry or we will be yelled again and we will have to hear that self-righteous brat speak of how we are not doing what we should and his even louder friend yelling about how he will suppress us all and become the next legend or something." I said good-naturedly and Sasuke shivered in the mere thought of it all.

Once again having to determine which cultivation manual, she contemplated which manual she would convert. Upon further deliberation, she decided that she wouldn't convert an element based cultivation manual due to 'Dragon Kings Incarnation' already providing 4 Affinities. Instead, she thought of an ancient manual which in her first life as the First Paragon had taken from the once mighty Demon Sovereign. A cultivation manual which although an Inner-Cultivation method, was fundamentally different from other demonic Inner-Cultivation manuals. The 'Demonic Witchgod Transformations' manual allowed oneself to eventually obtain the powers of a so-called "Witchgod" a type of being which had died out eons before the First Paragon was even born. Although, some of the oldest legends spoke of their almighty, insurmountable powers.

Let me know if I'm getting too dark. I won't stop, but I'd like to know nonetheless. The military has a dark sense of humor, and we tend to revel in these kinds of things. I guess for some it's a coping thing, but for me I guess It's just a way to pass the time. What could I ever need to cope with? I haven't lost friends, or seen someone I care about get hurt. Ideally I never will. I hope that fifty years from now, when my grandchildren ask me about 'the war,' I'll have to lie and tell them how much of a badass I was. I hope I'll have to fake it. I hope that no one ever has to get hurt so that I can have a tear-jerking war story to tell.

"Again, I'm a baby. What did you expect?"