The SHEWOLF & The LAST HE-DRAGON

I have read the other title by the same author 'Rebirth of a Genius Creator/Destroyer'. Author can bring really good twists on a regular cliche. Looking forward to this

I am only writing this for free pass (fp).

First let me start of by saying the reasons I like this novel.The main selling point is the unusual ability of MC to control insects and his merciles persona. Besides that, I personally think the interaction with the spider girl, Victoria is very cute.I always appreciate a good romance inside a novel—not too dramatic, nor too light—along with strong action sequences. If these two factors remain consistent throughout the novel, I might give it a full read until it's finished.I don't think a brilliant writing quality is necessary to attract someone like me, as long as it's not unbearable grammer or too AI generated, its fine.I don't know in which direction the story is shaping—this early in the novel, so I can't really comment about that. Though, I can feel you are trying to build something solid with the flow it's going.Honestly, and I mean I'll be very frank; I'm in it for the spider girl and well made characters, each having a distinct personality. As for the aspects you can improve on:when shifting from a emotion invoking scene to a different one—completely unrelated to it, try not to include too much details or added information in the following scene. I'm saying this because people, when already stirred with emotions beforehand, tend to skim past the long paragraphs filled with information, because they are forced to surrender the emotional content they felt earlier.Now onto the world building. I feel like you can improve on it; you know... adding a bit more depth and information about the world, or perhaps highlighting the surrounding atmosphere and vibes.Consistent upload schedule is always a given. There is no compromise in this, if you want to have a successful novel in this app, especially at the start.And yea, that's about it.. nothing more I can critique on. Keep up the good workP.S: all of these are simply my personal opinions, and I never claim to be an expert.also P.S: I'm a HUGE sucker for good fluffy romance, and action scene.

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The author attempts to deconstruct the isekai story, but it just feels like a forced and twisted mess to me. Just so you know, I only got through the first part. In the second part, two, most of the characters from the previous section do not reappear. Oh, and the MC starts going by a different name. But everything still same pattern, MC move to different school. When I began reading, I had certain expectations of this novel, as I enjoyed the MC's character and his interactions with the other characters, finding them vivid and engaging. It's enjoyable. The MC's already connection with many important character as childhood friend, except the main girl and the protaganist. Then, you get to see things from both main girl and the protaganist POV. They hanging out with the MC at school, thinking they're gonna grow and change as characters. But the author throws you for a loop, making you wonder if these are even the same people. Turns out, they stab the MC in the back. The protagonist, who was all about friendship but couldn't find the guts to back it up, turns into this monster who's all about 'collecting' girls like they're Pokémon. And the main heroine, who seemed so sweet and innocent, is actually some kind of mastermind in this weird twist. It's like everything's just being flipped around for the sake of shock. And don't even get me started on the characters who get killed off or the heroines forced into crappy arranged marriages, or the one who's a rape victim. I started reading hoping for a feel-good story, but I ended up pissed. The story just gets gorier and more depressing, turning into this total tragedy. The MC's up against a god, and the author really drives home how powerless the MC is against Zeus, who wants to make his girlfriend to become his wife. Instead of dragging the story out with more resolution, instead the author make part two with new academic story and similiar pattern from first part. The author should've just ended the first part by allowing the MC to achieve a successful revenge against those who wronged him. This make many reader satisfied with ending.

Hmm, how should I say i don't know but why i mean why you make his mother her soul mate . It's kind of okay but not that much but again conversations are awkward and why his mother's olmost every sentence end with ❤️?

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Didn't make sense not to live for fun