The Ruraera

Nice and intriguing. The story has great potential. Kudos Author

The writing quality is actually pretty high in this book, cant say much about world building as it just started but. It seems promising. Now a few tips that i think could help are that, you probably shouldnt add any type of romance. With it not really making sense as the Mc is another species. And dont add a female Paragon as it will just feel forced andruin the story. Also dont make the protagonist a hero or antihero that tries to save the world. Because i feel like its getting over used and wouldnt match the Mc personality. Now he dosent have to be a villain either. He could just be willing to do what it takes for his goal.But overall i like where the story is going.👍🏼

It seems that he tried to copy the world of the wizard named Leylinfarlier, but failed. The world order is absurd. Knight techniques are used more in a wizard academy, and a first-level apprentice mage cannot defeat someone who is not a knight. In the wizarding world, the mage is the main profession, the rest should have a smooth development course, if not weaker. Whether it's the power dynamic, the meditation method, the break, the adventures, it's very simple and misinterpreted. Failed

Finally find something worth reading and this is free to read

"I hate this" Dae walked back near the bonfire and put her head on Nayeon's shoulder. She stared the fire, her eyes became blurry and damp, she felt cold stipe on her cheeks, then realized that big tears were running down her cheeks and and TWICE girls awed and comforted her.

Yoo Jonghyuk didn't want to be on the limelight, but a certain system seemed to keep testing his already very shallow patience. Even though he saw no notification from the system yet, the regressor was sure everything was its doing. Yes, definitely. There were no other possibilities available.

He liked to accompany Claire even when she was a stupid princess and a childish one at that. A feeling he kept denying himself to feel.

"Look at your hand, boy."