The Once & Future Queen [Villainess LitRPG]

This book is a great addition to the genre, blending action, adventure, in a World that became a "game". It feels really refreshing to read, and is just at the right place between originality and mainstream.The grammar is generally well-done, with clear words that aren't overly complicated for non-native English speakers. There are a few typos here and there, but they don’t detract from the overall experience. The author clearly puts effort into improving, as the latest chapters's quality is increasing every day.Character development is a point that is difficult to rate, as we've mostly seen Sora for now. We delve into the character's thoughts quite often, and it's easy to grow attached to him. I'll read future chapters to see how it goes for new characters.The story development is steady, and the pacing strikes a good balance between action and quieter, reflective moments. So far, I love the world building and the simple yet efficient concepts that rule the world.The writing style is one of the things I like in this novel. The fights aren't 5 chapters long, we are not spammed by the sounds of swords clinging, or have random Young Master jumping from out of nowhere to get face slapped. The dialogs feel good to read, the descriptions are good, and the emotions conveyed sometimes triggered a reaction in me. The author might be new, but I can feel the intention to write something really good.It might not please everyone, but I must say it is worth giving it a chance. The story starts well, but it gets even better as you read more and more.

Third book!Still under massive editing. ☺️

Man i like the writer and the store so far it's relatable 💀 and how he is too honest with us sometimes and now I'm writing random stuff to fill the 140 word Mark

Just started reading and will give it a try

Omgggggg I love love love this book! It's funny, the characters are well executed and the overall plot is engaging❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ Dear Author, you are absolutely talented!!!

Why all of those authors love to spoil your own work? The first thing that bothered me was the big difference between the two author's works, Krune was a pacifist who hated killing, here we have 2 psychopaths who don't care how many people will die if it benefits them. I was just disappointed that the author just made more of the same, but it's okay for me.What irritated me deeply was the mature MCs simply acting like children, the worst thing is seeing them interact with children, that's disgusting. It's disgusting to know that they met a 12 year old child, watched her grow up and even though they are countless years older than her, they end up having a relationship with this child... I expected that he would only introduce any kind of romance after a long time where they would meet much older people, I believed that Roan would not end up with anyone or with someone as old as him but not with a brat girl, that was disgusting to me.

That's the way I like it and I never get bored

The soldiers wore some military equipment that was almost the same as what the Roman Empire soldiers wore in ancient times in Planet Earth, from their armors, clothes and to weapons, all were medieval and Roman-like.