The Main Characters Are Real

there is no problem you are story but the biggest problem is that your MC is just a total psycho does not have a single emotion and I think you psycho words with better for this kind of character that you made it does not develop or understand that he is doing something wrong and there is no right and wrong for this psycho Main character of yours

The plot is beyond reproach, full of ups and downs and without a single dull moment. The protagonist's growth arc is so relatable. He isn't a born powerhouse. I truly and strongly recommend everyone to read this novel. Believe me, once you start reading, you won't be able to stop!

The story is developing nicely, with exciting characters, an intriguing plot and an awesome attention to detail. I look forward to reading more of your work, and so it'll be staying in my library.

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Researching krynnspaces, chapters 20 to 30 will take more effort and research to complete, i appreciate your patience while I work on the novel

As the hills approached near, Bhumi started getting anxious; she had never been to hills since Akash's death. Dev had known it would be difficult for Bhumi, but his mother had instructed him to take Bhumi along. He had taken a longer, different route to Nainital, but, nevertheless, the journey was proving to be difficult for Bhumi. She kept trying to tell herself that her fears were baseless, and sooner or later, she would have to overcome her fears.

"Wow big brother is what you said the truth? You can really help my big sister?" hearing what Lin Xing said, Mengmeng's eyes brighten and she asked him enthusiastically.

screw you, making me stay up till 2am reading.... :/