The Mahabharata: A Tale of Dharma, Conflict, and Redemption

Good start to the book.Keep up the good work

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Right now, author has made the effort to improve his or her writing, and while its still jumping from here to there. It is still a good and relaxing story so far.The Updates that the author promised of 2-4 chapters is being keep, but it’s more like it’s being keep at 2 chapters every day.Story development is not great, but it’s not bad either. At most, I can tell that the author at least has a direction to head towards to.Character designs on the other hand, the cover is good but if we went with description of a the characters in the novel itself, only the character “Mirelle” has been describe. I hope to see a proper cover in the future and a description of the main character in the future. I still don’t know her name. Lol.The world feels alive at the very least. It isn’t as alive as LOTM since it’s just the start of the story, but with the recent chapters, it kinda feels alive. Like it feels a bit deep. I hope the world gets more alive and more deep as the story continues.If this continues to be free for another 10 to 15 chapters, I might review it again later.

He rolled to the ground and start running run to the tree. He bit his lip and wipe the stupid tear in his eye. He had many scratches and bite but some bastard was making a huge wound in his back and Beatrice was making a temporary shelter with the tree behind them. He tosses her cream and let her bandage his wound.

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

He lightly tapped the Love Love Quest! Universe and put in one or two of the souls.  He sighed in relief that it worked, and now the person was going to become a mob character within it and choose how they want to live.  He created a Goddess to interact with them before they were sent into the world.

I really like first chapter but there is no more chapters to know about the novel plz update more

Gardner, John. The Art of Fiction: Notes on Craft for Young Writers. New York: Vintage, 1991.