The Mafia peace

This reminds me of those toxic relationships only those involved cannot see until it completely ruins them. I also like the simplicity of each sentence, makes the story flow in a much better way. Keep it up. Can't wait to see how Helen's story unfolds.

I like the overall idea of the book. From the world building to the dialogues and description. Good work

I like your book. your book need review so I am here. yes your book have minors problems but still you deserve 5.0 score. hope you keep writing

10 Chapters in so far and the mother seems useless.. Great1. There is some errors in punctuation that needs a bit of work, but that does not get in the way of the story and I expect them to be flushed out, they are easily spotted and not a bother to the story, the story progression is a bit fast but not much to talk on, definitely going to read the novel again when there's enough chapters and information to go on. the level of detail is acceptable altho I do get lost in the scenes at the start, the protagonists seems like a well planned up character with some thought into it. I am a fan of the genre of either a veteran or a strong individual reincarnating, this type of book is not a bad read or a best book title but it is something I would suggest a look at you might not like it or even hate it. (god I hate walls of text)

You're too slow to tools a story. Let's go update ahead. I'm waiting and get wetting

The MC is cool, OP with an insane ability, but he can be frustrating at times with his overthinking. Like, just kill the enemy why you gotta think so much? Then he ends up killing the enemy in the next couple of chapters so it's like seriously this guy😂. Updates are quite decent and overall the story is enjoyable🤞

"Young Master! Come hurry!" He yelled while running. "The Lord has been worried! Come quick you mustn't keep him waiting!" Sure thing, it's not like I'm freezing to death here, I'm only five for god sakes. Without waiting for a reply he scooped me up like a sack of potatoes and began running back to the castle.

So much to do, so much to see