The Honest Woman, But Mary Sue

A real good romance with a touch of simplicity in it. I commend on the reader for her great development.  It is a nice book to read.

Kinda cliche not that I dislike that. I just wish the mc wasn’t someone’s summoned creature kinda also usually when something evolves it evolves into something more powerful in that category of monsters or whatever unless influenced by something. The mc however when from a slime to and explosive slime which is ok then straight to a wraith lmao kinda a weird development idk.

From what we got it is a really interesting idea but the writing needs to improve, i don't mean this in a bad way for example you use the same words a lot of times like I , I said ,I thought you could next time use stuff like as i said, thinking to my self, doing so basically try and use different words. The second issue was you don't let us find stuff for ourselves  for example when Cyrus's dad tanked the fire ball and said "I'm immune" it sounded dry and boring try only hint that he has those abilities aside from these issues it's really good 👍

Just wondering you going to go futher then the other adaption on here called God emperor instead of Eternal God emperor.

pls .... just pls don't drop this book. It's actually quite good

And all that glitters is gold

not noisy and shallow as sewers..

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