The glitched one: Backrooms

Setting is interesting, some characters are neat but the story is woefully inconsistent. The author writes things and then either ignores them or forgets about them. This leads to ham fisted plot devices and inconsistent characters.An example: the character describes a useful feature, the feature is automatically activated, and yet as the plot advances you realize it could have only happened in the way it did if the feature didnt work.Characters will say things to other characters but when the plot requires it its like they never did, like that part of their character only exists when necessary.MC also alternates between extremely foolish and unrealistically smart. Hes more concerned with face slapping than development but also thinks bad people will just be nice again.Oh and also, I feel this needs to be said he is very cruel to an innocent woman and I wont say more to spoil that. Its not worth reading beyond free. Author needs to keep track of what he writes about his characters, if he did that he could make full use of an otherwise brilliant setting.

Good job love it hope it won't be dragged for so long as I am looking forward to the unfolding of the story otherwise am glued like no man's business 😊👍👌🏾

Their next course of action startled the four of them. The villagers along with the children knelt down before them.

Seeing my reaction, she started to laugh, but she didn't let me go.

I see him roll up the quest and put it into his bag, then turn to me.

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Demons/Devils/Whatever are just another race. It's just that they have great affinity to the dark element so there's a higher chance of them committing crimes or have mental problems.

Ofcourse Shan Cai loves to eat and the food she ordered were here favorites too. With in thirty minutes all the dishes were finished.