the girl on red

This story has good potential, really enjoy businessman mc. Hope mc apires to gain power and eternal life

It's the second webnovel I read from I_Cook and its work of art once again. It's really easy to immerse yourself while reading; language and vocabulary used are superb, grammar is on point without mistakes and story just flow.Pacing is stable throughout the chapters so far  (up to 141), no plot holes or too obvious plot armor and yeah ofc mc got good stuff, skills etc- look at the tags, he is supposed to be strong and op.I like that romance just happend without NTR or some young master lusting over fml for over 40 chapters like in other novels- it's adorable and hits that sweet spot you are craving from romance tag. (possible spoiler- FML is NOT useless ! and is NOT ice user xD) Chemistry between characters is great, dialogues allow to easily differentiate different people talking, with each of them having their own quriks etc; moreover it's not just dialogues, each character feels like real 3d living being and not 2d background character. If I were to point something out then it would be long descriptions to skills, items and whatnot taking a lot of word count, but it's matter of personal preference- some may skip it, some may like it. Personally I like reading these effects, my only worry would be power scaling xD But i strongly believe author will provide and story will continue to slap.

Very nice and very good book. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Hey man, let me know once you update this book. I can't wait for the next update.

afterwards the mother comes in, and the firstborn hugs her mother. then he walks out of the room. the mother then opens the window so light could come in the room.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

Rain Mumbling

"You have no idea," Luffy replied before turning his attention back to the princess and the bounty hunting duo. The three of them then peeked out from behind the rock to check if the coast was clear. After making sure no one was around the three of them took off in the direction of where the large dust cloud was approaching the capital. "So, they are heading straight for the rebel army," Luffy observed.