The Fractured Dominion

Here is my review about this novel:Worldbuilding; The worldbuilding is so far quite alright, especially with the system and its the mechanic that is quite interesting. Overall, its fine and has a potential to be explore more.Characters: Frank Gunn is indeed one of the most entertaining main characters with his sarcastic remark and his eagerness to fight the monsters. Furthermore, his relationship with his daughter is a strong point in this story as the author quite showed their closed bond with each others. As for other sides characters, so far they alright for now.Plot: I like the author show quite a lot of fast pace action to make it book more engaging to read. I also like the plot for the story is also quite smooth too.Overall, if you like system novel, I recommend to read this book.

Nice storyline!!........................

"Bye desu."

All that glitters is gold

"Yes father" Chrodeas gulped as he said those words.

The whole situation was incredibly emotionally taxing! Wrath from his girlfriend's infidelity, rage from not getting revenge, indignation from being forced into a contract, exhilaration from the possibility of gaining superpowers, vexation from being talked down to by some stupid kids, and irritation from not being able to take out all his pent-up anger!

"...Yes…"

"Witchcraft?" He said before pulling the stone from the wall. Right after pulling, the young man almost kneel down from an invisible pressure coming from the stone. The young man lip turn into smirk as he clench the stone in his hand, the visible pressure crumbled as an intense force assault it.