The Existence Upgrade System

This story is creatively written, the fact that Alex is a female got my attention! The gift of reborn is rare but precious to whoever is lucky. Patiently waiting to see new chapters soon.

It is a nice story that touches in the family sphere as the angular stone. Some of the interactions are really enjoyable to read.Things to improve:Grammar: Some redundancy and hard sentences make it block the flow of the reader.Characters: While I liked the interaction between characters. It misses some inner thoughts on the making for the characters. Using subtext would create more connection with the public.All in all, keep the good work

If he drops this I’m dropping kicking him

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

I ain't the sharpest tool in the shed

He felt the pain disappear as he opened his eyes again. He looked down at himself, though he still could not feel his limbs. He was normal again, as if nothing had happened. He stood up, a flickering orange behind him. He turned towards it, no room in his brain for fear any longer.

A loud explosion rang followed by the sound of Sasha fell on its back interrupted his activity. A hole was made on its forehead and puddle of blood formed under her. Kahn turned to see his beloved bear lifeless. Dead.

She slowly cracks her fist and i slowly look up to her shaking... Everything is shaking!!... My palms feels cold and my body feels dead already by just feeling this dark aura full of hatred and embarrassment.. And a aura full of desires to end once life and i know its me.. *gulped*.