the disciple and his shizun

Details are okay and intriguing. Typos are there and it’s inevitable

Good writing so far, interesting world building and MC.

It is finally here. Another witch and devil story. Another book from one of my favourite authors. This book has potential. I can't wait to see a wonderful love bloom between the two main characters. Thanks for sharing another one of your stories.

"She probably planning to spike Prince Lance drink and while his desires in control she will seduce him. What a cliche plan but knowing Prince Lance he will make her at least a concubine in his home. She will probably poison Emperor Evan and blame me somehow getting revenge on both me and the Emperor" Nicolás explains to the system in his thoughts.

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"Itigil ang kasal!" Sigaw ko habang seryosong naglalakad sa gitnang bahagi ng simbahan.

"Yeah never been better" she got up and is slashed a 100 times and she felt a hand grip her shirt and it throws her to the other side of the ring. "He's really fast" she said to herself and he disappeared.

  Obviously, the number of people who have the system has gone up a lot.  So, it had become harder to deal with them.  I had to adapt a bit to deal with that discrepancy, bring them down a bit.