My Stalking Diary

Ooooh...i liked it...it's really a good story

This review is as of chapter 25. I will rewrite this at a later time. Likely chapter 50-100 sometime between then.The book is worth a read. It has many strengths. But with it comes a few glaring weaknesses. Gramatical errors are few and far between. The authors ability to write is decent. A couple typos and missing words every few chapters but it doesn’t hinder the reading experience.The main character seems pretty decent. He’s enjoyable to be around and I can say with certainty he’s likeable. What I thought was going to be a garbage trope between the nobility and our Mc was trashed. Instead I have a unique fresh breath of air. The mc plans to not hide his strength (to an extent) and the “young master” role is filled by someone arrogant yet understandable. The biggest issue lies in the world. Our main character is constantly bullied by soldiers despite being just a child. It’s upsetting in a bad way. It seems pathetic and makes the viewer see them as a joke. It isn’t the best system. It feels often forced that he is bullied just for that tragic upbringing card to be played even more. But other than that I’ve yet to find any glaring issues. Good read worth everyone’s time.

writing quality is amazing. I can tell the author has read much and knows how to write. the updates are amazing, with 2 chapters a day coming out. Story so far has been intriguing and I feel it's just going to get better and better.

He then forced a smile as Lila ran out of the house, jumping over the porch steps and into his arms. Laughing as he caught her, he gave her a quick twirl.

I know this might be where I die, Which to be Honest I really don't want to happen, but here I am.

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At an instant 5 of us stormed the entrance and killed the guard before they could warn the peoples inside, while the other 3 had gone to the surrounding forest to look out for another entrance that can be used by the thieves to escape from us. Right after we killed the guard, we split again according to our role before.

Absently, he just went on grumbling at low volume to more fully answer her previous question, "Back there my clones are doing a brilliant job of lowering his expectations before they drop everything they have on him. If only we had more TIME!"