Spooky dorms

Noobs, listen to your big bro. You have managed to come and read this MASTERPIECE. Thank your mom and dad for giving you birth🥸

hello this is Author, I am not beneath reviewing for my own novel, the novel is good. you might find some small mistakes like casing but as a reader they wont really make much difference.  read if you want your mind blown and loose sleep on what's going to happen next.

I came across this novel suddenly, it caught my attention and so I started reading it.It is certainly my first novel to read here on WebNovel, it is quite good although to be honest it needs a lot more development although we will see that later of course.

Hmm, can't say much as it's only the first chapter, but so far it's good. I like how the author is giving a different personality. I think MC broke the 4th wall and stuff

"was a hateful, spiteful, and jaded teenager with a sour outlook in life"thats'sthe description of the MC, and it's the  MC who is making more difificult for me to keep reading this novel.Besides that, almost not gramatical errors (i think I only found one in 28 chapters), some descriptions are a bit repetitive some times,  but I've found that's quite common in the novels here (I'm gonna gues that if enough readers have a low attention span, that's some kind of requirements).The story is progressing with a good rhythm (at least for me), the world is not very much described, but that feels logical cause everything is happening in a very specific location; but we get some glympses here and there. His system...it allows him short burst of being OP but with a high cost; and actually something that I wonder is if he will have to devour half continent to have some decent stats (he just have raised his mana stat to 35, and the person with the next lowest mana stat is over 600...5 point per life seems a bit too low, at least if the conversion remains at 1 point per stat increase).All in all, if you can get along with the MC, is an entertaining story, and i really hope I'll come to edit this review in the future and say that the MC becomes less insufferable after some chapters.

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