Sponsor System: Harem With Infinite Money

Honestly, I felt the world built and background is interesting, but need an improvements in writing area. Particularly, word choice needed to be refined in some areas. Flow of story is pretty engaging. Awaiting more chapters to read!.

He snapped out of his daydream when he heard the boy's voice..."..Mr. King may be a Satan but he really has a great taste. The view of the city from here is mesmer....." Damien stopped hearing after he realised that the person who was being called Satan here was him....HIM..,sweet little him.....ok the statement was wrong hell it was a crime to speak his name and the words like sweet and little in the same sentence. He was well aware about how people thought about him and referred to him behind his back but this little guy surely had guts calling him names in his own office and on his face, alright not exactly but still....... was this guy too naive or an idiot that he didn't even notice his presence.

"Don't let that freaking word leave you damn mouth dam it! I- am- not- staying- here, Light. I know what I'm saying and I know what I saw." She looked around and felt like eyes were piercing into her back, forcing its way to her soul. Ana felt prickly and became agitated as her skin started to scratch.

Raden mencium bibir pemuda itu sebentar,lalu ia berbisik ditelinganya cukup lama.

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Well, the time has come I start sprinting a few meters and jump.

"No." commandingly General replied spitting the cigarette then narrowing his eyes in slits then he glared into eyes of his colleague's.

Author... Your novel is damn good... But only problem is that why did u stop releasing new chapters?? It's been 5 months...  Kindly release a few more chapters ... Like until the MC gets himself a girl and live a comfortable life kind of settings... Hope you will start releasing chapters again.....