slaves of freedom: glitched souls

Good plot and good storyline indeed. I like the way the dialogue flows so well and so naturally. I did notice some grammatical errors here and there. But overall, this is a good story and I love it!❤ Would be back to read moree when new chapters come out.

it's a good start . keep grinding alright .

This is well-written, it's only a matter of time before this became well-known. I'll be supporting this! Keep it up man!

So much to do, so much to see

I went to high school, behind my back, my auntie booked me special classes so I could fit in with the other students, I would have respected her decision if she had told me.

I woke up in the hospital. I was covered up in bandages. Hunter investigator showed up. They asked me how was I feeling. I said alright happy to be alive. I asked how am I still alive. They responded you were lying there in the room. There were no monsters. The room was empty, just you were there. They asked me more question like what happened, how strong were the monsters. I answered them to the best of my ability. The investigator left and told me to rest up. I was in the hospital all alone. Then suddenly a screen appeared before my eyes. I got scared. Can I only see this? It said Do you want to enter the reawakening stage. You can change your life.                             Yes                               Or                               No

We walk a little bit further, my mind still on the kid, and then reach our destination. We step in and the bell attached to the door tinkles. The witch in the shop (that I assume is Madam Malkin) greets us with a welcome and a warm smile. She asks if both Becky and I need new robes, but I have to explain that she doesn't go to Hogwarts. Madam Malkin looks a little disappointed after that but she quickly moves on.

so I am quitting the story here