Since I Became a Commoner, My Engagement Was Annulled!

This novel is very wonderful, I advise you to read it 👍👍

Great start. Enjoying the story unfolding.

I’m surprised that this is actually very good.At first when I read the synopsis I almost dropped it instantly because of the “and accidentally obtained the immortal cultivation heritage” part, I thought it was a super OP heritage but it was actually just a Qi Cultivator’s heritage, which is good.Now let’s talk about the Cheat, unlike the Check-in System that literally rewards the MC with super OP things for doing nothing the Achievement System of this novel rewards the efforts of the MC,the System sends him a mission and he has to complete it first before receiving the next one.The rewards that the System gives him are related to the achievement that he completed:-The Mc turned 100 years cultivating? =A fruit that increases longevity by 60 years-The MC attempted to break a bottleneck 100 times = A chance to immediately break a bottleneck, either a minor one from 8 to 9 or a major one from Qi to Foundation Establishment.-The Mc cast a spell 100 times = A jade that allows him to perfectly master a spell of the Mc’s choice.Mc Jiang Chengxuan was in this world for more than 100 years before getting the system so he has a cautious personality, he is already an experienced man, now that he has a system he’s still cautious as most of the quests he’s received don’t require him to put himself in danger (for now).So far the MC has made very logical decisions, no young master has appeared and the supporting characters seem very intelligent, they don’t unnecessarily seek trouble with others as if they were parodies of human beings.Although there are only 19 chapters so far so they may appear later.The translation is also very good, they don’t change the gender of the characters in each paragraph.In conclusion, this has a lot of potential.

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Steve shook his head as he looked around, "It's been over for a while now, Tony. We lost." He said, his posture defeated as he looked around them.

System : The magic itself is harmless so to say so you won't have any damage. More like it is actually beneficial. But I must warn you Host. The impure blood has been removed, but it is the most numerous or the largest percentage of them all.

To attack the guy with the guitar make a solo and Throw in Nelson direction, how get hitched again, he almost being defeated, he have a ideia, he blow on his flute most hard he can, his ideia are make the flute have the same effect of "Berrante

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