Since I Became a Commoner, My Engagement Was Annulled!

This story is totally uninspired and not worth reading in my opinion. I read the first 60 chapters and so far it's all been incredibly generic. The chapters are short, the characters are one dimentional and have no depth, the plot only exists to serve the main character.The author is writjng 2 books at once and publishing 4 chapters a day and it shows in the writing. entire chapters of this book can be summed up in 1 line and everything is so drawn out for no reason. you just can't write a proper story if you're forcing 4 chapters a day.

awsome great............ happy to read good one to find................nice interested to read need more chapters to read .......all should read

If you have a passion and look for a book about dnd than i ask you to leave because as long as you are somewhat familiar with dnd and played some this book will make you cringe hard. 40 chapters in and i can say that translators knowledge about dnd is nonexistent, while authors could only be described as superficial at best. The book is set in modern Earth where MC often travels to different "virtual" dungeons to kill monsters and gain loot. The story is filled with videogame references and humour but is not excessive. The MC has normal view on life and stable personality. While overall it's not a top tier book it has it's own charm and good points so I recommend it to read for people interested in world-hopping genre.

great book overall and i was really looking forward to reading it. that was until i woke up to discover that about 20 chapters i have already read have gone premium. its such a letdown cause i had very high hopes for this book

The story is well written.  I'd encourage the author to find a more succinct way of showing the system feedback as it currently takes up 25% of a chapter (sure would be nice if inkstone supported tables).  I don't feel we know enough about the characters yet as most of the characters, aside from MC were given some background and then left to simmer, but it's still early on in the story.  Overall, well done for the first 17 chapters :)

Please do not read  this book.Not only is it repetitive and hellishly boring, UT is also full of derogatory language and may offend you. Also what has happened to this place.

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