Scurry

And so I have read this story, I guess Its time for a review. Well the synopsis is interesting. The first two chapters are well written and keagan and Fred's dialogues are humorous. #pizzathief
The Mc is not like those who lose all hope in life after getting a bad news. He lives his life to the fullest... As a criminal!
All in a all, I'll give the author a five stars. #justchill

Hello, lil kitty~! I rarely read and leave reviews because I too focused on my writing so much however, this day is different because I want to read what my friends are writing.

Here goes~!

First 2 chapters are up, and it is already interesting! Knowing that you are writing at a young age, this is already good~! I like your choice of words! The atmosphere of the setting is light hearted as it is fun! I know that this story will soon have a twist, ya know? I am going to expect more from you, lil kitty~! You made me smile!

Keep up the good work! I can really see potential~!

I am at chp 9 and totally loved this chapter : Slow dance with me.
Waiting for the moment when Sarah shows them the recording. Hehehe.
I must say, wonderful story out line and i ship Keagen and Freddie.. Lol.. But this story is having nothing disturbing at all. Its going good in its own way. Good Effort dear author. :)

The plot is captivating, I really enjoyed this novel. A few errors here and there but that can be easily solved with one proofread or two. Punctuation is great. Everything was vividly described, and the details in the world background are just precise. Good job author and I wish you the very best!

The pace is smooth too by the way.

A story about a young man who's shocked after being diagnosed with stage-three cancer. At the first glance, you might recall the many stories involving that wicked disease which causes the protagonist to lose a love interest, or a dear friend. Of maybe they lament as their wonderful lives were ending sooner than expected.

But, guess what? This novel in particular has NOTHING of that. It's so entertaining! And the comedy is just something else!! The jokes by each chapter are genuine, unexpected, and are not repititive.

I myself couldn't contain the smile on my face. Normally, I'd read a chapter or two of a novel each day. But, this was so amazing that I finished all the 14 published chapters at once!!

The writing is simple and excellently descriptive of the setting and actions. The choice of words also deliver the jokes just right! My only comment is that I personally think there's too much swearing but I'm sure no one actually minds it. But for me, when swears are used at limit, the humor sounds more likable.

Alongside the humor, the plot is also very advanced pretty well! I can proudly say that this is an interesting story not just a book of jokes you'd find at any library.

I seriously recommend this to anyone who reads for fun. It's very likely to lighten up your mood.

Special thanks to the author's efforts!! Good luck and keep up until the end!!

The author has done an amazing job at crafting this masterpiece. All you need to do is read the synopsis and you'd want to read the book. And it doesn't disappoint at all. Great read. 10/10 recommend it.

How do you happen to spend the last 5 years of your life as a crime boss? Like mehn..  not only that, you are a legendary boss who deals with the pizza theif. Ahaha. This is mystery and comedy and everything all together. I'm impressed

This reads like a mid-2010s **** cable tv show, and it's glorious.

There's a certain feel in your story. Like your characters are really living their lives in the moment. It's a sense of wierd nostalgia that I cant put my finger on. It's good, is what I'm trying to say.

Very wholesome. Keep on writing