Satan's Grimoire

I like how the story goes, even though it's only 9 chapters as of writing this comment. Nonetheless, Your story has Good flow.

The book is one that actually has a good storyline, but I feel there is still room for improvement.The book pacing right from the first chapter is too fast and not much time has been allocated to really explain the book which can be negative. It is a good one, just make sure to adjust it so for it to be much more better.

With a quick movement he plucks one of his ears in the blink of an eye.

Reji memusatkan Kekuatan jiwanya untuk menarik primordial qi untuk menyehatkan jiwanya.

-Este portal fue bastante peligroso.

"Where the hell is Arisia?!" he screamed as he clutched is hand.

Normally, a System wouldn't shut itself down—especially if the user was asleep or unconscious—so that it could keep track of the physiological condition of its host. These are kept as log files, which hosts use to keep track of their status. Of course, this data is also forwarded to and reviewed by the various research departments that are affiliated with or are directly employed by the World Frontier Federation.

System: Ding host has a more thin psyche because your muscles have condensed but the major change is the aura host gives off is so chaotic it reveals Eris goddess of chaos System recommends that host gets an Aura concealment skill or talisman with consuming the apple and your aura there is a high chance Eris will take notice of host it is unknown of what will happen but you are to weak to even compare to the gods.