Robyn Wood and The Mysterious Tribe

Very Nice Story hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

The premise of this story is wonderful as well as the idea behind it. Perhaps it's just me but for some reason the writing comes off awkwardly. For example 'he asked interrogatingly' or 'he said assertively'. You use phrases like that consistently. If a question is asked usually it's automatically in an interrogative tone since an interrogation is just an official year for the questioning that the police do. Basically, it becomes a bit redundant in that aspect. There are also other things you can use to describe besides those adverbs. For instance instead of saying 'he said assertively', a phrase like he stated in a tone that made it clear he was serious. It's longer but it fits in and provides imagery. I am honestly not trying to Lecture of put you down because I think it's amazing to pursue your goals and consistently put in effort. It's just that I personally believe that I'd be doing an injustice by not saying anything because I truly like the premise of the book. It is a skillful blend of both modern and ancient to me.

This is a gem!!!! i stumbled upon it a month ago and I must say it's a fantastic read that leaves you thirsting for more. Good job author-sama 💕💕

Well written world setting. The author had taken care to ensure that every character has a proper introduction.Reminds one of their school/college days. A great read!

Author please dont make it too long for the family to be together🙏

I love it, the reason why I’m not putting it at 5 stars is because we haven’t really seen any other characters other than the mc, and the world while promising, has yet to be explored by us readers. But the writing and grammar? Godlike, there is not a SINGLE mistake I’ve seen, truly one of the best written works I’ve read in a while just based on the writing skill. For people like us, who like ruthless mc’s, this is definitely for you, he does not care about anyone other than himself, and his ruthless levels equal Fang Yuan, so yeh, very enjoyable for people like us

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

But LiMingHu didn't answer, he just smiled and then held TianTian's hand and led her into the car, "let's go..."