Revenge Of The Cripple & His Phoenix Bride

Overall, I really enjoyed the novel—great worldbuilding and story progression. The only thing that pulled me out of the immersion a bit was the main character’s emotional range. He tends to react the same way in most situations, like always clenching his fist or keeping a stoic face. It makes him feel more like a machine or Ai than a person. If you could add more emotional depth or variety in his expressions and reactions, I think it would make him feel more relatable and human. Other than that, I’ve got no complaints—keep up the great work!

Let me first start with male lead. Draven- this devil got me when he stripped FL’s clothes and left her naked to check a mark on her. He is cold and emotionaless but I can’t seem to hate him. Someone with immortal life and living for thousands of years with lost memories and have no clue of his own origin, makes me forgive him. Morpheus- the second male lead. I simply love this shapeshifter eagle. He is cool, sly, caring and loving. I love the way he and Draven mocks each other.  Though he has alterior motives with FL, i just love him. Ember- Human or witch or something else. I am so curious to know how she is related to Draven’s past and the woman in his dreams. If she helps him regain his memories. Whether he sends her among humans or keep her with him when humans are not allowed in his kingdom. How she manages to summon the devil to save her. CURIOUS ABOUT HER TRUE IDENTITY.World- it’s a fairy tale world full of all kind of supernaturals from elves, witches, fairies, shapshifters. the reference images author provides, makes me jump into that world. Lastly, I look forward to reading more becaue it doesn’t look like any other romance novels where ML and FL starts feeling attacted towards each other in just first meeting without any reason. This story has a strong base and reasons just like the first book of the series and this is what I love about this author. All the best and lots of love. ☺️

"So, i'm not suppose to tell you if i do turn back the time?"

Asch: Hey grandpa, I caught 3 Bangus today, lucky lucky!

Opening his eyes, Xi Mo knew he refilled his Spiritual Essence completely, so he smiles. Now that he refilled his Spiritual Essence completely, it is time to do something. When Xi Mo thought of it, a dangerous light shone in his eyes.

bell:don't worry Kami sama I'm fine.

" You'll have to train in this world until your body is strong enough and I'll lend you some of Samsara's power. " Mia spoke with a calm expression.

"Iyon din ang sasabihin ko sa'yo Summer!" Nagtaka naman ako sa sinabi n'ya.