Paths Divided

Hello, new author here!You can treat this as the "QA section" of my book, so feel free to leave your comments, reviews, and complaints (preferably nice ones). If you enjoyed the ride, a review would be awesome! If not... well, let’s pretend we didn’t meet. 😅 Your feedback keeps the chaos going!

A very interesting  read. Though the genre and style seems common the author strongly emphasizes story and character development. The author strikes a great balance between the otherworld life and the "real" life in the novel which is the key to writing in the dual life genre.The setting and world building need a little work because theyre too generic and very little is written about them. Just a city and a village. Needs time, culture, and technological settings at least. Magic is there but to what extent? Theres too many basic questions left unanswered for 200 chapters.The MC is written well as a person and has so far (200chapters) developed well in character. His persona as a struggling person is deeply rooted and not awkward or forced which is reflected well in his speech to choices and distrust of people. +points for well written desperation and seething anger.Though he is given OP skills his actions are not really too absurd and does not take the reader out of immersion. The author does fall into the summoner having too much summons that they become forgettable trap, it seems like the author is holding himself back for now.Side characters are written very well. The sister gives life to the MC and showcases his more familial and caring side. She herself highlights both their backgrounds and motivations. A well written character that provides impetus for the MC to improve himselve and strive for something more.The first opponent provided a satisfying and believeable character arc. A cliche that was believeable and satisying even if a cliche.The main antagonists are capable, smart, uncaring, self-righteous, and provide a satisfying foil to the MC. The hero can only be as good as the villains he defeats and the villains make you love to hate them.Though the story, setting, and some elements are predictable, the style and characters make this story fresh and an easy good read.

yo author what happened with the novel why not update please dont do this to me dont mind this web novel wont let post a review for some reason so i typed this im guessing its bc of low word count

It is a very entertaining story, the characters are striking and it makes you feel curious about the development of the story. I like it, I definitely recommend it. Give it a chance, you won't regret it.

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

"It seems she had mistaken me for an acquaintance and called out, but… we really hit it off from there. That is all."

According to our sources from the palace, our dear crown princess seems to be missing, it was said that the princess was last seen at the pearl palace walking thru her garden on Tuesday. It was also said that all the palace maids were panicking, finding god knows what.

in the afternoon some people enter the room that are the hunters who north him to the vilge fatter some time he aske tham worried li what is happennige outside after some cauele take like who is he filling cane he remerber any thing aboute is family or which counter or vilige forme he is  he fast said he cant remember