Pal Lord: A Different Kingdom Building

Amazing and interesting highly recommend

Great book! I like the precise description of the storyline a lot …

This book is certainly catchy but not as intense as it has to be. Try adding a bit of intensity to it and make the Characters even more satisfactory

The book is fast-paced and very interesting. I wasn't even expecting a reincarnation, but it all fits perfectly. The characters are also well described. This story is a good read. Good work Author

The writing quality is shit, the author can be forgiven if they are not a native English speaker but even then, they wrote 100+ chapters so the author should've fixed the spelling mistake they made, unless their English hasn't improved which imma be honest ruins the story for me, a story with terrible grammar is worse than a story with a terrible plot, anyways it's not that bad :P

A few moments before Max was going through the town with his group, the streets were full of soldiers fighting so instead they were jumping from roof to roof, searching for a good location, most of the soldiers didn't even saw them, but nobody could complain, they were busy fighting for their lives, they shot down every archer they saw, but sadly since their route required more agility they left the soldiers that carried shields behind and instead their group was formed fully with archers, leaving them without protection and thanks to this a few of their archers were killed already, but not as much as the number of enemies that fell to their arrows. Later max arrived on top of a building, it seemed it was some kind of brothel or so it seemed, in front of it was the greatest fight in the town, Max started doing his job, he readied his stance, hold the arrow on the string with three fingers in a graceful way, aiming at the idiots that were beneath him putting a useless fight, and then he found an opening in one of the soldiers, the man used his shield to bash a stark bannermen, throwing the later on his back, but before he could finish the man an arrow pierced his unprotected neck making him drown in his own blood, then he looked at the middle of the plaza, there the soldiers seemed to be leaving some sort of space to the knights that were fighting in the middle, a man with the sigil of house Tully was fighting a knight with a sigil of griffins, the weird thing for Max was that lord Hoster didn't bring any of his forces so he didn't know were that Tully knight came from, but seeing that he didn't had any opportunity to attack he searched for a more suitable target, and he found them, half a dozen men fell to his arrows, when he looked at the Tully knight again the man was in the floor with a wound in his torso, a man with the sigil of house Arryn was now engaging the griffin knight, he was clearly stronger and overpowered the Arryn knight in short time leaving him on the floor and without any defense, the enemy was clearly overconfident thanks to his victories, and left an opening but Max only had two arrows now and there's a difference between shooting a man wearing leather or even ring armor and one wearing full plate armor, if the arrow didn't hit one of the weak spots of the armor the arrow would do nothing, it will be a test to all he have learned till now, so he first started stabilizing his breath, put the arrow in the string and then took aim, he waited for an opportunity, there's always one, when the man started swinging his sword to deliver the final blow an opening was revealed in his shoulder, when his arms were raised they left an unprotected spot, most armors have them, otherwise it would hinder the movements of the wearer, and even when it sounds simple just an expert archer could make that shot, and sadly for the griffin knight Max is one of them, when the arrow left the string everything seemed to be slowing down, if the arrow don't hit the spot two of his allies would lose their life, and while he certainly has seen many men die in this war now he could save two of them and he certainly won't fail, just after the first arrow hit the exposed shoulder of the griffin knight Max prepared a second one, the last one, this time his arrow won't be able to hit the shoulder since the enemy already dropped his arms after getting hit but with the strength of the arrow the man took a step back, leaving an opening in the internal part of his thigh just were his arrow would hit later, dropping the man to his knees, seeing where he was shooting at, Nona shoot at the man but before her arrow could reach the gap of his helmet another knight came and took the arrow with his shield, she was preparing another arrow but in that moment something else happened, a man with an antler helmet and the sigil of house Baratheon came from the brothel, hammer in hand and started hitting men left and right, raising the morale of the troops and seeing him and that their commander was injured the loyalist troops started fleeing while the rebels were cheering and regrouping around Robert.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Lydia: Honey do you think the kids will be alright at beacon hills?