One in a million

hello I'm the author of the book and  i have  changed  a few chapters so, read them again ok sorry of the change. and improved my grammar too

Overall not great but not horrible. Now the reason I came to my conclusion: writing quality no major errors noticed, strangely used opinions by mc that have no connection ([example] thoughts based on ideals of groups or organizations that do not exist in the current world), story development feels very slow and often times can be set aside without feeling a sense of urgency to prolong reading, character design is left mainly in nondiscription with few details about characters given, world background is only given to the reader in a sense of novel title otherwise no towns, city, forest, country, road, home is ever named directly (within the first 30 chapters locations that can be given life or even a name are countable with one hand). To finalize everything, novel is hit and miss

the story is going  good bro , will waited for next Chapter

I recently started reading this novel and I must say that it is an interesting story and the writer's mindset is amazing and quite impressive. I've been reading the chapters as soon as they get updated though I would say that the updates are slow and you have to wait long but it's worth the wait. I also like how the author adds little tips at the end, making many things make a lot more sense. Overall, appreciatable.

*Oooong~*

It's a cool place and they say it gets colder

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

"Hard to say, at least 3 more days and at most a week"