Murim Combat System ?

It has a good and interesting premise, however, the sentence structures need work

  She wakes up one day and say"Dad one day I will make you proud even when you don't believe in ladies being better than men".

The leader and the two other members started to think. After a minute, Min So-Ra replied.

" yes mis,  thank you mis "

I absolutly LOVE this book! i love the author and story that he tells. I promise you will enjoy this! Its funny, serious, and a little romantic! READ NOW

It starts out, as most Chinese novels do, with a downtrodden, out of luck MC who suddenly receives good fortune in the shape of a wizard's hat shaped Virtual Reality helmet. The good point is that he needs to work to gain skills that can then be applied in real life but... it feels that his power progression is a bit rapid. On the other hand, the story is very well written and the emotional scenes are conveyed terrifically. It will be interesting to see how well the story eventually develops. I must commend the translator for such a good production. The use of language and expression are perfect plus the writing is enrapturing and drawing. On the whole, i recommend reading it for a bit of a Sci-fi / Wuxia twist.

one of the best pet novel in webnovel... actually I started to hate pet novel genre because huge quantities bad copy paste pet novel released by webnovel.after reading some good reviews I tried this one for just trying..after reading I can say it's not a gem...but definitely good read until last chapter I read. must try...

Writing as of chapter 8: The story development and world background is slowly building up and his interesting to see.  The characters interactions are interesting and feel real. There is a nice twist to the tower, dungeon genre as the MC isn't the only one reincarnating. It seems to hold potential. I might update this review as I continue reading it!