Mortal God of Blacksmith

So far, this novel has a wide use of vocabulary, which makes for engaging reading. The writing itself is enjoyable, with well-crafted sentences that showcase the author’s skill. However, by Chapter 8, the story feels rushed. Events move quickly without much time for buildup, making it hard to fully connect with the world or characters.Speaking of the world, there isn’t much in the way of world-building. The setting feels vague, with little detail to anchor the reader in a specific time or place. This makes it difficult to become fully immersed. Additionally, the plot lacks a clear sense of direction. While some novels take time to unfold, this one doesn’t seem to be building toward anything specific—at least not yet.Overall, while the writing itself is strong, the pacing and lack of depth in both world-building and plot progression make it difficult to fully engage with the story. I’ll see if things improve later on, but so far, it feels somewhat underdeveloped.Another big issue I have is the lack one quotation marks. There is no use of them at all which can make it annoying to understand who is talking, for example “ ” - for when a character is talking out loud ‘ ‘ - for when mc is reading someone’s thoughts But anyway good effort from the author, can tell they care about writing.

Being betrayed must hurt a lot, but I mean it, this story is really good, the pacing also feels natural and not rushed, The content of the story is also interesting, remains enthusiastic, and is always consistent.

good book I was expecting more chapters this character Samuel is quite interesting I hope he overcomes his insecurities.

good story,             please keep it up

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

Yuki: -He appears in front of the staggered Bradley and throws a strong punch to his chest-

Three minutes later, he opened his exhausted eyes, which had a hint of happiness in them.

I was reminded of a case in the news two weeks ago. There was a suicide. The police kept shooing the people away from the scene, but I doubt that does it. Their warnings just draw their attentions, if anything.