Mask of saints

i read through some initial chapters and alr find out about 60 slaps. oh wow,odell is really the most abusive bas**rd in all of these kind of stories i read so far. not only that, there seems to be john mention in reviews. i guess ill stop reading it fearing my blood pressure will go up coz of anger

super good story with a great ending

Girl, you are bursting my head. Death Lord oo, Ella will not kill me. I cannot wait for him to be hopelessly in love so I can give him a cute pet name.

Welldone, Author.

interesting read

put Quintin in pampers now because he is mentally a baby

the story line is good but u need to keep the book/ chapters short .. you can complete the book by hving 50 chapters only...if u hve got more than 100 chapters them sometime PPL dnt read the whole book...just leave in half

Well the book seems nice, I give this much on first glance, I may change it later. The writing quality though... i mean it's grammatically accurate and seems well thought out but the style lacks a bit. it's time concept is faster than normal but no problem, but it is lacking a narrative element and is a bit bland, it seems like the dialogue is monotone and how there's a lack of proper overview  perspective needs more focus and there... you get the point.
but hey! writing is hard! just don't give up i look forward to your work

Gonna check this out, hope the author gives constant updates