MARKET OF SHADOWS

Hey, author here. So after releasing 100 chapters, I came to realise how far I’ve come in terms of my writing quality and pacing. I believe if you were to read chapter 1 to lets say chapter 40, it’s very different now but with that being said, I’m leaving my review on my novel. I will say that the first few chapters are slow but that’s because I’m introducing the world, their motivations, themes and characterisation. Layla came at chapter 1 but Emery and Zafira came later at chapter 3 or 4. Then atlas was around chapter 10+. It’s slow but I believe it’s worth it. Idk im my own biggest fan and critic. But thank you for reading The Broken Paths. I will do my best in writing and staying consistent.Also I will take any questions you have for me.

Overall, this is a good read. I enjoy reading game novels. The Mc is pretty intuitive and innovative when it comes to magic. He is also pretty innocent to the world, showing his young age. It could be bad depending on the situation, but it's nice sometimes to see as long as it's not too much. Too much innocence is just stupidity. He has a few moments in the later chapters that are close to that, but things work out in the end. There has been some good story building going on that allows you to see some interesting potential future paths to take. I look forward to reading more

Para él, Selma Star es un campo de prueba raro. tiene innumerables presas poderosas aquí, pero estas presas no son débiles comparados con ellos mismos, es el mejor lugar para que practique. .

This shut them up good.

You extended your wrist out to me, patiently watching as I carefully tied the bracelet around your wrist.

But it is peculiar, that no one remembers how we got here, maybe I'll ask them later. For now, I have to figure out how to get my casing back on me. it's getting chilly all of a sudden.

"I haven't changed, what's between us is just business and nothing more, I am helping you succeed, you have to abide by my rules." Angel couldn't help but shed some tears as she was being called a slut and a whore. She left the room and ran to her room in haste not minding Xavier.

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