Manhatan After Midnight

this might not be appropriate, but I'll still at least like to review my book first before anyone

It’s very nice and terrifying at the same time. How the characters die is very amusing. Kinda reminds me of final destination. I hope you don’t ruin it  Fonstine City.

Great characters, impressive story for the most part and good fights.

Writing this as of Chapter 209. The story is pretty good and interesting. In my opinion we can't get familiar with many of the girls because they have very little screen time or their appearances are too far apart. Sometimes it feels like he forgets about some girls (like the sorority house). as for the writing it's a little fast paced but keeps you in constant excitement but, most of the time the sentences become too long. Also, Punctuation is kinda rough. But overall it's a very entertaining story that gets you excited and keeps you waiting for the next update. A very solid 4/5 read

The Storyline is so captivating ❤️ above all so Refreshing.

Although the plot might be dark and tragic, the writers presentation of each characters emotions and scenery is actually so involving. I really want to see more great chapters from you🔥🔥🔥

"Apa kau tak malu? " Tanya Bayu.

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