Luminark Saga

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Es bastante interesante, es una historia un poco diferente de un mundo inverso y veo que vale la pena leerlo hasta ahora le doy 5 estrellas por un buen comienzo y una escritura impresionante en la trama y sus seguimientos. Aunque acaba de ser publicado tiene mucho potencial. Aunque recomiendo que también hubiera superpoderes más o menos al estilo Boku no hero, pero sin sus super villanos con formas extrañas, puedo ver que si se podría adaptar posteriormente. Lo que no recomiendo y se va a adaptar el enfoque de super poderes es que los poderes sean de orígen público. Eso es todo, por cierto agreguén más masculinidad al mc. Y también agreguen imágenes de referencia de los personajes.

Something, a nearly unreadable expression, seemed to flinch over the face of the old man for a short moment. But then it was gone.

other members near by was also puzzle then ruby spoke "wolf gave a cloneing technique to me so I can learn faster and once they disappear they gave me the knowledge the clone learn and sometime hurts when there a  physical change to the body but the one on screen is the real me while their 2 others so it 4 in total but I'm the one in school while the other 3 do their training with wolf and study while I been with you guys in school so I or we can be in other place while learning many things and that how I cut short on learning in a short amount time to learn most a huntress need and all the knowledge wolf can give me" sounded with proud and happy

It was 8 o'clock on a Wednesday, and Kassie most definitely did not want to go to bed. "Kassie! Bedtime!" Her mom called. Kassie squeaked from her hiding place in the wardrobe. "Where is she?" Her mom muttered as she checked all the usual hiding places. Under the bed, under the table, behind the door, but she wasn't there.

Sub: Show mortals your superiority. Reward: Maria helps you find a talented student.

Finally, Cliff changed the names of his former best friend in his phone to Traitor #1. He couldn't simply sever all ties with Alan right away, that would be too suspicious, and it wouldn't allow Cliff to repay Alan in kind. A betrayal of the worst order merited the same level of betrayal as revenge. Cliff had never understood the motto, 'An eye for an eye,' before, but he was definitely starting to.

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