Love From Another Dimension

Okay, but what if [character] has been dead all along? My brain is spiraling. This novel is scarier than my electricity bill.I swear, if that shadow moves in the next chapter, I’m out

One thing I would point out is that it's so simple yet easy to understand the world building that gradually happens, and how the plot manifests itself through the MC's actions and choices. Although there is very much room for improvement with as good as it is, it was definitely quite the enjoyable read.Keep it up, mate

This book has a good concept. the book is well written and has very few mistakes in the chapters.But.the writer of this book is missing some key points.1. The MC is wat to whiny and timid throughout most of the book, and only man's up when he's being shot at.2. the system issues rewards for completing missions, but the writer never goes back and explains them, and the main character doesn't use them and seems to forget about them.3. The whole Lord of the Rings arc is bordering on plagiarism. I feel this concept has great potential. more creativity and imagination are needed for this type of concept.

"I'm not sure of this idea Ryu. W-What if we don't work out?" I don't want his parents to see him as an indecisive guy who plays around with girls. If he is to let a woman meet his parents then it should be the one who will stay with him 'til death.

The other students, hearing Kirishima speak up, also started muttering among themselves. Some were so stressed by the chaotic scene that they couldn't even say anything. They could see the entirety of the building losing it's foundations. Given another 30 or so seconds, it will have totally collapsed.

"Help, Rose, I'm dying. Make a cool funeral for me, not borin'. Tell Margaret I love her. . ." He groaned, then limped his head to the side. I rolled my eyes at the spectacle.

+4 INT and +2 WIS.

You can't hit me either!