just my path to becoming the god of infinite reality's

okay first of the synopsis is fire 🔥, the plot is gold, the main character is very Captivating, I like the ☺️the world you've built here I'm actually really interested in it and I feel it will inspire me ☺️good work.

I'm just going to give 5 star review to my work. Anyway, as stated in the synopsis, the prologue will be quite slow as they are in 4 parts. After the prologue, the story will finally pick up the pace.That is all I want to say. I sincerely recommend you my novel. Thank you for reading. Please leave an honest review so that I can further improve my writing. Don't hesitate to be critical. Enjoy reading!

you author Nessy deserve lots of hearts❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️😘

"〈Flowing Slash〉!"

Lucien sighed as he brushed his fingers on his itchy face, exasperation in the tone of his voice. "Love... Love? Look at what his love has brought upon all of us!" he shouted.

Excellent story worth a shot.Complete english sentences with paragraphes, good writing style and rare typos. For an ukrainian who might not even be a native english speaker, it’s quite an achievment. The first chapters have more descriptions and inner monologues because it’s a dungeon story, but it soon switch to a better balance with actions and dialogues.Good world building, and great attention from the author to build a consistant magic system bringing enougth originality to stand out compared to generic magic fantasy stories. It’s called ”The origin of dungeons” and explores how such a world came to be.It’s therefor a bit weird how there are some inconsistancies or even contradictions between the actions and the established personality of the MC. It tickles me a bit, but you guys will probably overlook it just fine. I do warn the author that a too apathic MC that turns into just a camera for the readers makes for a boring story tho. An MC needs motivations, drive and agency, else the author will have to cheat too much and pile up the plot armor and coincidencies to push the story forward, turning the MC into a raft without sail pushed and dragged around by the tempest.Overall a great start and i recommend you give it a try.

Wow! This is a great start, it made me want to keep scrolling to find out what’s next! Keep up the good work :)I like how both siblings care for one another, and loved each other ‘till the very end.

While I’m a fan of TDG fanfics this isn’t one that i’ll be reading, the MC is basically already a GOD by chapter 2 and insists on playing second fiddle to Nie Li.