JAHIDA

Author-san, this novel is great. It made me addicted just after reading the first chapter, and without knowing I finished reading all the chapters. As a senior, please impart your word of wisdom to this humble and poor fellow Author. 🥺🙇🥰

Thank you for a good novel, at first I thought it gonna be western fantasy+system but it is actually Cultivation+system which also fits my preference.

Truly one of the all time greats!!!I really have had a lovely time reading this story and I can’t wait to read more!

Writing quality is fairly easy to understand. It's above average for a webnovel, hence, the 3-star rating. However, it isn't exactly on the level of top novels here so that's that.Story Development is fairly generic but hey, that's what we're all here for.Now, Character Design. This is the one that made me drop and rate, for a very simple reason too. The author tried to make the mc a cringe japanese protagonist. Somehow, even when the girls are swooning over him, he assumes something outlandishly different. It's too stupid it isn't even funny, like, are his eyes fake? Surely, it would be pretty easy to judge if you're at least  presentably looking no? But no, the author just had to crash down mc's iq to the negatives.Updating stability, I didn't actually check.World background, fairly average for an isekai plot.

I like the concept but there is absolutely no world building or any sort of background.

Only shooting stars

Should I stay late today or let him go early?

"from you're previous life, right?" The white mage—Alexandro? —said trying to reassure me