Hollywood's Harem King

5 star shameless Author review... heheInsane world building, unpredictable plot. Harem obviously, because why not?Any and all questions will be answered so feel free✨

Pretty good novel so far, I am really interested by the plot. It's kinda unique. The power system is a bit boring though. The author should also cut back on the exposition

I came here to leave a review since I'm surprised that someone hasn't left a review for a story of this quality. The truth is that the world building is quite good, as is the story and the context it gives and how it is presented. The update schedule, although there isn't a fixed schedule, is updated fairly regularly, and I hope the author continues this story, he's doing very well.

I could use a little fuel myself

Thomas e Jasper obviamente passaram em primeiro e segundo lugar, Heitor também passou, porém não demonstrou nenhuma felicidade, apenas olhava para Thomas com vontade de mata-lo, Ingrid era a única que já tinha passado desde o começo.

"Get her bag and let's leave this place. Oh, do not leave any evidence." Queen added and went inside were Lyricie was being treated.

It's a good novel. If you look past the obviously rushed first chapter, there's nothing terrible about it.Writing quality 5*- Apart from the first few chapters, the grammar is good.  Even those first few chapters are better than a good majority of the novels I've read on here. Though the grammar could always improve, 5 stars, for now, seem appropriate. Stability of updates 5*- Simple. The author releases at least one chapter a day.Story development 5*- It's too early into the novel to really say but for now I think it's going in the right direction.Character design 5*- Is going in the right direction. The characters and their reactions are genuine enough for a work of fiction and I got nothing to complain about. I enjoy Johnathan and the other twos characters. I also like their powers. Again, I have nothing to complain about. World Background 4*- This is by far the worst thing in this novel. However, that's compared to everything I reviewed so far. The world-building isn't bad but so far nothing's really shown how the world changed since the start. But I can understand why nothings really been said. in the novel, not much time has passed. Around 1 or 2 days. Which isn't long at all. So I have hope that once more time passes, the author will explain how everything changed and focus more on world-building.So that is my review. I hope this is helpful to those who are hesitant or are debating on whether to read. It's a good novel, but it's a bit early to decide and give a definite score. However, everything said, I believe the novel is quite promising. With the small teasers the author gave in the beginning, I doubt it'll only be zombies. Overall, I say this novel is a 4.8. It could go up or down, but for now, I say it's a reasonable score. Thanks for reading, and Author, I hope you keep up the good work. I do suggest rewriting the first chapter and extending it so it's less rushed and more natural.

honestly speaking you book is readable and enjoyable and everything is perfect I did not read all the chapter I only read few .chapter and i was amazed good job author keep it up