GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?

At first I started to read it to kill time but as the other characters introduced i was so hooked in the story that I binge read almost all chapters in one week and I love it you should definitely give it time and read it with patience up to 50chapter then you will know it's worth

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I'm writing a review only for support.           Thanks to the author for his work, I would like more chapters and I ask the author not to repeat the same information 10 times in a row, it’s annoying  a a aa. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a a a.  A a a a a a a. A a a a a a. A a a a. A a a a a a. A.  A a a a. A a a. Aa. Aa a. A aa. A. A a a a a a a. A a a a a a a a a. A a a.  A a a a a

Take this with a grain of salt, and see this as constructive criticism.

As a first time reader you can’t really take the words of an author at face value when they say it’s worth it or not when comes with their work.

You can’t really expect an reader who barely read enough of MC (due to the heavy amount of filter in the early stages of the book) to spend their own money to unlock chapters. who knows weather or not its worth it.

Based on the little amount of screen time the MC has before the paywall, I don’t think it’s worth it to continue reading due to problem of information or lack thereof.

Honestly seems like story more revolving around the Elf guy than the official MC, based on how he has all the basic qualities of a MC (insanely talented, transmigrated from Earth, creator of a system, etc etc) and everyone singing praises about him.

Look there as to be a reason why although it has well over a thousand chapters it’s so low on the ratings, it could be good for all I know, but the beginning ain’t what you wanna see on a top rated book.

Side note: You gotta delete those useless chapters, you are already limiting the amount of chapters you have to read, why do it more?

I think Soverick unknowingly captured me through the book into the void universe and I don't want to leave as long as Legion is still there.The background of the story is just so unique and other characters have realistic thoughts. There are other special characters that have main character traits in GREED, which adds to the uniqueness of the story.The story can spend a lot of time going through some arcs, but the writing quality always keeps me enjoying the story to the fullest.Overall this story is one of my favorite books with a unique plot, realistic characters, and philosophy to change your thoughts on sacrificing yourself for 5 exact clones of yourself to live. Every day I know that I can check and see that two amazing chapters have been released for me to read. Thank you for giving us this wonderful work of art that I can tell has a lot of thought put into it.

Alignment: Neutral Evil

Final Score: 3.5

DISCLAIMERS:

The rating given is my own opinion of the novel at this time. And may be subject to change later.

The rating given is relative to the material on this site. Meaning a 4 or 5 given on Webnovel is not a 4 or 5 given on Amazon.

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"A Diamond in The Rough"

Few stories are able to capture their readers. Whether that be through its excellent plot, characters, or world-building (There are some freaks of nature that manage to capture all three).

Unfortunately this is not one of those stories. There are periods in the novel that seem utterly benign. The author seems to be desperately eager to share all their wonderful ideas for the world and its power-system. However, this process is neither gradual nor subtle. It's akin to drinking water from a firehose. The info-dumping is simply terrible.

It's info dump after info dump, words and sentences that string along together that make coherent sense but aren't meaningful in any way to the reader. At times I can't be bothered to care for any of the characters in the novel, including the protagonist. Simply because we don't spend meaningful time with him at all. It's constant P.O.V changes and lore/world building that's taking up the precious time of the main character. The protagonist is supposed to be the catalyst that brings the world building and other characters into play.

At times I feel frustrated with this, at times I wish to no longer waste my time, at times I feel like forgetting about this novel forever.......

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Is how I previously felt about this novel. Before a certain point in the story I felt tired of this novel and had serious misgivings. But the author seems to have listed to the criticisms, and made some changes.

They started to put more effort into telling the story of the MC! There were moments in this novel that were genuinely exciting to read, but I was always overwhelmed by the info-dumping. However now since the author made the necessary changes, the readability of the story has increased by at least two-fold.

There are still info-dumps but they're more manageable and do not get in the way of the MC's journey.

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The world of "Greed: All For What" is vast. The power system is both simple yet complex (in a good way). There are clear denominations, and each stage is given it's own unique trait.

However, there are unique ways in which one can find loopholes (or exploits) in order to gain more power. Our MC's cheat is practically based on finding this exploit.

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The protagonist is simply a breath of fresh air compared to the generic cultivation mc template. This guy is willing to do whatever it takes to reach his goals. If he needs to sacrifice someone or something he's willing to do so. However, there are very few moments where the MC is willing to prove his "dao" so to speak. When they do pop-up in the novel they're always a treat.

There are times when the MC is overshadowed, and relegated to a minor role in the story. Nevertheless, the author seems to have learned their lesson and made efforts to make these occurrences few and far between.

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The author's work ethic and discipline are truly commendable. They release on a daily basis, and sometimes twice a day.

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What I would like to see in the future:

1. More "Dao Affirming" Moments. I want to see the reason why there's an evil mc tag.

2. More dialogue would help (although finding the right balance may prove difficult).

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Overall:

This story suffers greatly due to the excessive information dump that impedes the protagonist's journey. However, underneath all that is a story worth telling. In my humble opinion, I think others should read this story. There is a soul here, and the author is very passionate and willing to change. Despite the author's mistakes, this story is worth reading as long as the author never loses his way.

I have read upto chapter 43 and I can confidently rate this high in most aspects except for world building. Specifically the cultivation aspect of it. Since the cultivation aspect wasn't built step by step but rather in an info dumping manner, I am as of now still unclear of what his entire plan is doing. If the cultivation knowledge was built up in a more reader friendly manner, I would've rated it higher. The story development is excellent so far and the world building is phenomenal as well. I only have a complaint about the cultivation aspect of it. Another thing I believe the author can work on is the descriptive aspect. Increasing your vocabulary and designing scenes that seem to literally suck the readers attention can do your story wonders.

When I first read the synopsis I was happy, as it is rare to find a book where the MC is not either dicking around with diff girls or being hella overpowered. But well it disappointed me, the first 4 chapters of yours they are very boring. I do know that you might have wanted to explain the world's background but you could've taken a diff approach.
All I am trying to say even though your story might be amazing or the idea behind is amazing, the way you put it in the words was a little Disappointing.