Go back in time and become a fruit seller

Okay, I just finished going through the chapters, and I’ve got to say. I’m really intrigued. There’s something about the way the story mixes normal school life with this weird, almost eerie atmosphere that kept me reading. The characters, especially Kama and his brother Ariz, feel super real. Their back-and-forth was funny at times, but also kind of emotional in a quiet way. You can tell there’s history between them, and that made me care about them more than I expected.But I gotta be honest... the chapters are long. Like, really long. I caught myself scrolling and scrolling, wondering when a scene would end. Don’t get me wrong, the writing is detailed and flows well, but I think it would help a lot if the chapters were broken into smaller parts. Not because the content is bad but because it’s a lot to take in all at once. Shorter chapters would make the pacing feel tighter and give each scene more punch.Also, there are some moments where things get a bit repetitive—like a character’s thoughts or reactions looping in similar ways—but that’s nothing a bit of trimming wouldn’t fix.Overall, though, I’m hooked. The slow reveal of the school’s weird vibe, the strange behavior of the teachers, and how Kama is just trying to stay low-key while getting pulled into something bigger? I’m totally here for it. Just… maybe give us a breather between the scenes next time 😅

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Hello, first of all this book is going very well. As a historical fiction reader I have to say a few things. When you write a book, don't worry about what someone from this country will say. You can't write a book that will please everyone, no one can. Don't pay too much attention to the comments, after all it's your book.

The novel was amazing 🤩, but it had some areas that needed improvement 📝, such as the main character's behavior 🤔 and the story development 📈, which was slow ⏱️, considering it's been 95 chapters 📚 and the original main character is still alive 👥, and the tournament arc hasn't started yet 🏆, including the battle between the main character and the original main character 💥.

So in my previous review I was thinking of a different book so I will start over. I Iove this book, she is always running into new hot very powerful males, but she will need them as she is special. you never get bored. The writing quality is good and the story doesn't  get confusing. I am only disappointed that I ran out of chapters so far 😆.

Very goodI mean we all have that one friend that can't handle their alcohol😂😂Only problem is spelling errors here and there but overall good

1+2+1+3+1)/5=1.6sincerely, congratulations to the author for taking a brave step and making the effort to make this story.however the story sucks. the grammar is plain bad. the paragraphs' lack some work. like more capitalisation. and stories that try to mix english and japanese just feel like they're lacking in quality.

"Ethan!" A woman's voice called for me. Was I dead? Why do I feel so cold? It hurts so bad. The pain won't stop. Pain? If I was dead I would not feel that right, right. Wait, something warm is touching me. I opened my eyes to see a hand reaching for my face.