Eldric Chronicles: Buddouchai (Book 1)

The story itself is intriguing. The characters are well written. Grammar & spelling could use a little more polishing/touch ups; but over all, it's a good story that's hard to put down.

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Read Neato it's complete. and as the author I have to say o really made something spectacular here

Huh?

The boy smiled brightly. "It was nice but it could've been better if you were there and of course Ichigo."

It's an amazing novel by general and the manga is also very comedic, it's a novel to laugh about not to take seriously because if you do you will not like this very much.

Why the f*ck are people making fun of this book? Well, they're not quite making fun of it, but it seems like they are belittling it. That really pisses me off. Especially since this book is written better than many printed novels I’ve read. There’s some action, politics, and fantasy elements floating around so I think it’s a fascinating web novel. The main character isn’t ridiculously strong nor does he have a high starting point. I’m pretty sure he was reincarnated into a child beggar and still hasn’t completely recovered his memories. However, even without all of his memories, he is incredibly intelligent and is thrown into what I suppose is the world of politics due to a few special circumstances. Since he’s currently only a child, he can’t do much and this is proven by how he often finds himself in dire situations. Well, he may be a child, but he’s not completely helpless either, so I think I’ll stick around till the end. The story doesn’t just revolve around the main character so I get a little irritated every once in a while, but it the chapters without the main character are also important so I can’t really complain about it. This updates pretty often and the translation quality is way better than I thought it’d be, so I have to say that I’m pretty satisfied. Well, anyway, I find this web novel really interesting so maybe you would too.

When I read harvard, I thought it's that famous school. When I found out it's a name, I was like, okay that's cool. I find your story funny to read, although I'm sure it's not a comedy. I'm entertained by your plot and story set up,  especially the character.  When it said "sort of float around"  I crack up. Anyway, your story is a good material and I wish you luck in your writing journey.  Keep up the good work author!