Echoes of The Primordial Flame

(sorry in advance, english is not my native language)I've read the first 38 chapters. I really enjoyed the beginning of the story for the intelligence and honesty of the characters, the fact that there is a quid pro quo for power and use of the system, the mission to bring the deities back into the world, the grandiose battle scenes. However, I don't like the main character. He's interested in saving this other world to stay alive, he deliberately shows a brave attitude so that other people trust him, he's admired for his foolishness in the face of danger, and we don't know what he thinks about the presence of the gods. People just want him to lend them his strength without anything in return, and he regards them as NPCs, although he seems concerned about the two women who accompany him so that we, as readers, become attached to the characters. He's not a hero but still wants to act like one

Hello! Author here.DTM is my first novel ever, and I have tried my best to make it as good as possible. Please let me know what you think about it and ask any questions you may have.

" I... I am not the Goddess of Death, Zae. " I said " I didn't expect you to like Zae... " I continued as I suddenly let go of him and sit on the edge of the bed. I just sigh and smile at him.

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

"Look at you talking all big, just you wait." Leaf pouted before she followed along.

Out of nowhere, he saw a figure appear, he squinted his eyes as he tried to make out who or what the figure was. His heart started to thump in his chest, his palms getting sweaty as he started to hyperventilate.

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[Yes, these are human footprints. of the type and number of prints are probably 3.]