Dual Skill: Flame Empervert

Then appeared a skeleton out of the darkness near the end of the Judgement Hall. The skeleton wore a blue jacket with black and white striped shorts, and pink sneakers. He also had a glowing eye of rage.

"hah apa!???"

"No it was a good thought. Probably would explain our dream." It did make sense I just.. I haven't felt this way. what do you say? I don't know about love at least not well. What is this feeling? Why does it burn inside me.

The author of this novel needs to be sued for copying word for word from the novel " most generous master " like he did it so openly that it's crazy....If you don't know what write then just quit, writing isn't for everyone.

Great book but plz work on it at least monthly, I don’t want this book to end up like great demon system

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Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Sentence construction is also not great. So 2 for Writing quality.Not sure about the updating stability as I don't follow the novel...Look as far as the novel goes apart from the writing, is very avarege. The OCs are mostly generic and the mc is basically templated. I feel like there also some developments wich are unlikely but that can be glossed over by this just being a fantasy novel of that style and the world is obviously so that's still good even though there issue's when comparing the logic of characters and their abilities to the original world.

The character is stupid and arrogant. His friends are also unbearable to see. It could have been much better. well read at your risk. if the main character was better this novel would have been much better