Dual Skill: Flame Empervert

The character is stupid and arrogant. His friends are also unbearable to see. It could have been much better. well read at your risk. if the main character was better this novel would have been much better

Honestly, author just **** up this novel. So many messed up profesionist. I mean cultivator why dont stick to path of cultivator, MC just turned into card wtf was that. And honestly mchine gun? Boxer? How can they fucking strong, and what kind of reain they did to become strong? Spirit enery? Mana?. Oh btw MC habe War God system right? Why dont depend on it to become god?

Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Sentence construction is also not great. So 2 for Writing quality.Not sure about the updating stability as I don't follow the novel...Look as far as the novel goes apart from the writing, is very avarege. The OCs are mostly generic and the mc is basically templated. I feel like there also some developments wich are unlikely but that can be glossed over by this just being a fantasy novel of that style and the world is obviously so that's still good even though there issue's when comparing the logic of characters and their abilities to the original world.

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Great book but plz work on it at least monthly, I don’t want this book to end up like great demon system

The author of this novel needs to be sued for copying word for word from the novel " most generous master " like he did it so openly that it's crazy....If you don't know what write then just quit, writing isn't for everyone.

Fking translator alway fking ruined it, and webnovel fker doesn’t care.

I got asked at chapter 134 to make a review and this is my review.Writing quality great.Story development is also great but it seems like you forgot the shop girl who is the only woman who got his mother's "acknowledgement".Character design is great except for the Mc's friends from the real world who I personally don’t want in the story. His harem and family is enough. The Mc is also to weak without his glove wich is the only thing I dislike about him.Current updating stability is 2 chapters every day and that is absolutely great.World background is interesting but Zach   has said that he traveled to other realms with his father and he should have been able to train qi/mana there.The game is interesting but the lower floors are boring and you know it. You even made him go into a sea realm to make it a little bit more interesting.