DIAGRAM: THE HEART

Dear readers, thank you for joining me on this journey and becoming a part of this story. I have poured a piece of myself into every page, and it means so much to me that you’ve found something that resonates with your hearts. This project was not just a creative challenge but a personal exploration for me. I hope my words have inspired you, offered a new perspective on life, and perhaps helped you look deeper within yourself. Your feedback and support mean the world to me, and I am truly grateful to each and every one of you. Thank you for trusting me with your thoughts and emotions!

the first two chapters are ok. Maybe will read more...

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" Mike wait , we need a hair style" Tiffeny spoke up before Mike leave.

My honest to goodness review: I hate to stop reading upto chapter 2, although I find the story interesting and the plot was piquing, but the lack of proper quotations and the space in between words were giving me a hard time to read thoroughly. Polishing needs to be done, dear author. I like the setting though, of course, it's the Philippines. My country.

The book is amazing!!! I fell in love with each character, their attitudes and their kawaiiness(pretty sure that's not a word, but meh). The 18+ scenes were especially great. As a yaoi lover, I give the story a full five. Only regret is, author-sama hasn't updated it!! Please update soon author-sama! I love it!! ♥ ♥ ♥

The story was enjoyable and funny. The system seems to be operating under the basis of an eye for an eye taken to the extreme. To learn something great, the cultivator must be under great pain. There were moments of great comedy created by the overthrowing of tropes such as someone that everyone expected to be arrogant young master turning out to be a very helpful person with love for the whole class. However, my concern for this story is that it'll turn out like "The Strongest System" which turned out to become old and repetitive after a while. Also, the sheer speed of the MC in his cultivation has me worried about pacing in the story. Lastly, I have no idea how serious events in the story might be handled which also has me worried. Overall, I found it to be enjoyable so I'll keep on reading.

I may enjoy a cold and evil MC, but there are several problems:1st this is way beyond, I’ve read untill chapter 233 and he was the worst person in the whole novel, he is a complete sociopath2nd his personality is completely flat, he is like a robot, completely devoid of emotions, and incredibly boring. It gets tiring having a psycho MC if he never makes you laugh3rd and most important: the MC can be a total sociopath, but when the author tries continuosly to justify his choices with some cheap logic and a ridiculous view of the world that can be easily destroyed by anyone with a bit of common sense... well... that’s when u break the limit, if u want a spycho MC fine, but don’t try to make readers take his side as if he could be justify. He can’t and his logic is ridiculous and full of holes.I could go on, but, honestly it’s not worth it. I just add a last thing: the system of the nobles doesn’t make any sense, there is no wolrd were it could work it’s completely idiotic. Even if 99.9% of nobles are complete idiot that decides to keep any resource and technique for themselves there is bound to be someone who does not, and this someone would easily gain power, since it’s been clearly shown that there are countless genius among common people and just providing them the techniques would easily surpass all other powers that have an extremely low number of members die to their idiotic system.